My personal essay. Please, correct it

My personal essay. Please, correct it

We go shopping practically every day when we need to buy some food, household things or other purchases. Shopping has became very important part of our life and we can’t imagine what we would do without it.
I enjoy going shopping when i have a lot of free time and of couse i have some money. Shopping sometimes can be a good way to spend a time. I like going to the big nice shops, it can be fine amusement.
Anyway, buying foodstuffs is not very interesting. It’s boring for me. But i like to buy various nice things, for example clothes or jewellers. I also enjoy buyimg presents for other people, especially souvenires.
Anyway, i’m quite good at looking after money. I try not to buy unnecessary or useless things. I think, everyone can learn to use money sparingly.
>>to be continued…

Netigejai mobiliuka minkyt? Nekaltas Sorry but i won’t correct it, i won’t even read it Nekaltas have strange mood today Nekaltas

For example, when i was a little girl, i used to buy sweets and ice-cream every day, but now i strive to save money in order to buy anything i’m dreaming about.
I think, it’s a good idea for young people to take saturday jobs, because then they can to supplement their pocket money. When the teenager have more pocket money, they can buy anything they want and not to beg money from their parents so often. And of course, if the young people earn some money themselves, they learn to be more responsible and become more independent.
Anyway, if i and my family were richer, i would be happier than i an now. It so because, i could buy everything i want and i would never need to save up money. My parents could have more holidays and we could travel more often. And of course, shoping should be more pleasant when you have a lot of money!

People, please, i need your help… for tommorow… The questions were like these:
"Do you enjoy going shoping? What kind of things do you like buying? Are you good at looking after money? Is it a good idea for young people to take Saturday jobs to supplement their pocket money? Would you be happier than you are now if you and your family were richer?"

starlete rašė:
We go shopping practically every day when we need to buy some food, household things or other purchases. Shopping has become very important part of our life and we can’t imagine what we would do without it. <br/>I enjoy going shopping when i have a lot of free time and of course i have money. Sometimes shopping can be a good way to spend your time. I like going to big nice shops, sometimes it’s like an amusement. <br/>Anyway, buying foodstuffs is not very interesting. It’s boring for me. But i like to buy various nice things, for example clothes or jewellers. I also enjoy buying presents for other people, especially souvenires. <br/>However, I’m quite good at saving the money. I try not to buy unnecessary or useless things. I think, everyone can learn to sparing the money .<br/> >>to be continued…

For example, when i was a little girl, i used to buy sweets and ice-cream every day, but now i strive to save money in order to buy something I dream about. <br/>I think, it’s a good idea to take saturday jobs for young people, because It’s a way to supplement their pocket money. When the teenagers have more pocket money, they can buy anything they want and not to beg money from their parents so often. And of course, if young people earn some money themselves, they learn to be more responsible and become more independent. <br/>Anyway, if i and my family were richer, i would be happier than i am now. In that case i could buy everything i want and i would never need to save the money. My parents could have more holidays and we could travel more often. And of course, shoping would be more pleasant when you have a lot of money!

Thanks, SUNLIGHT!Laimingas

Well, I guess SUNLIGHT did what you asked. There’s nothing more we can do Cha cha.

I think, it will be ok!Šypsena Thank you Solarius tooCha cha

Anytime Gerai