Artūrchikas rašė: Gal kas turit pavyzdiu ar aptarimu kaip juso reiktu taisiklingai rasyt? Kokias guudrybes naudot... laukia egzas, tai noreciau gerai islaikyt
Rasant paragraph, imho, svarbiausia nenukripti nuo \"topic sentence\", \"develop your idea\" kiekvienu sakiniu, ir padaryti tinkama isvada paskutiniajame sakinyje.
Mane labiau jaudina valstybiniai vertinimo kriterijai. Gauti maksimuma neimanoma, nes vertintojas, bijodamas suklisti, darbo neivertins kaip \"perfect\", nes kas yra tas \"perfect\"? Vienam atrodo, kad tema atskleista \"perfect\", o kitam \"very good\", o tasko jau ir nebera...
Todel tik vienas zmogas Lietuvoj gavo maksimuma...
Mano ziniomis siemet bus essay vietoj paragraph,o tai- keletas mazuciu paragraphs.Ruoskis vaikine.Ir dar reikia moketi ir CV,letter of complaint etc.parasyti.Neuzsiciklink tik ant paragraph!
tetulyte rašė: Mano ziniomis siemet bus essay vietoj paragraph,o tai- keletas mazuciu paragraphs.Ruoskis vaikine.Ir dar reikia moketi ir CV,letter of complaint etc.parasyti.Neuzsiciklink tik ant paragraph!
Is kur tu zinai, kad vietoj paragrafo bus essay...?
nu kajpgi..bus paragraph..essay taj kitajs metajs dar arba mus saunej apgawo essay sejs metajs bus sse rigos testuose wat syta zinau o beje what are the rules of writing an essay?
Kiek as zinau, siaip tai paragrafas turetu but, musu mokytoja mus jam ir ruosia... Apie jokia ese negirdejau, mokytoja buvo puse zodzio uzsiminus, bet tik tiek...Jeigu kas turit daugiau info...netylekit...soris kad not in English...
The first sentence in a paragraph is the so-called topic sentence. Here the author of a paragraph reveals the idea he wants to discuss. For example, \"People have different phobias\" might serve as a topic sentence. In the following sentences of a paragraph one might discuss different kinds of phobias, group them, compare them with each other (it depends on the author which method he/she chooses), starting every sentence with \"first of all\", \"also\", \"moreover\" and others, and \"finally\". The last sentence of a paragraph starts with \"in conclusion\", \"to sum it up\", \"to summarise\" etc. where the author either summarises what has been discused, or simply repeats the topic sentence in other words.
By the way, if you are going to take an exam in English, I highly recommend you chating here in English.
Teacher rašė: The first sentence in a paragraph is the so-called topic sentence. Here the author of a paragraph reveals the idea he wants to discuss. For example, \"People have different phobias\" might serve as a topic sentence. In the following sentences of a paragraph one might discuss different kinds of phobias, group them, compare them with each other (it depends on the author which method he/she chooses), starting every sentence with \"first of all\", \"also\", \"moreover\" and others, and \"finally\". The last sentence of a paragraph starts with \"in conclusion\", \"to sum it up\", \"to summarise\" etc. where the author either summarises what has been discused, or simply repeats the topic sentence in other words.
By the way, if you are going to take an exam in English, I highly recommend you chating here in English.
Thank you for your help.
I\'m goin\' to take a \"valstybinis\" exam, bet our teacher is so dump, that she is not teaching us to write paragraphs, so thank you again...
Gerai,jau gerai.Buvau rimtam seminare,ten mums ir pasake.O siaip pasiziurekite i siu metu uzsienio kalbu egzaminu reikalavimus,ten viskas surasyta,ka reikia zinoti writing\'o egzui.\"Enterprise 4\" yra neblogos medziagos su planeliais,pavyzdziais ir kt.
Today i was writing a paragraph in School. Topic sentence \"If i met my old friend\"..............it was one of the easiest writeing, becouse i wrote everytihing from the heart....... i mean the from the real situation.........
....my english teacher never stops repeating that linking words are very important while writing a paragraph. Well linking words are all these: first of all, to start with, initially (beginning)
afterwards, before this (continuing)
finally, last but not least, eventually (concluding)
if,in case,providing,only if,assuming that (condition)
concequently,for this reason (consequense)
as, since, on the grounds that, seeing that, due to (cause/reason)
likewise, equally (similarity)
.....
and many many more
The day of egzamination is coming; i not only know it but i feel it.
Firstly on the last days i feel pressured. I think it\'s becouse of teachers. They are getting more and more homework
and all the time repeating that we aren\'t learning. Besides i star thinking more and more about coming egzams. My minds are full of
egzams so i cann\'t focus on studying. Also to get sleep is getting harder becouse of my
minds of learning. Surely i all the time think that i have to study and to prepare for egzaminations my self but it\'s
only my minds. I am to weak to force my self becouse i haven\'t valitional at all. Speaking generally i think that this
is normal and all the graduates feel as i. I think everything will gonna change after egzams.
The day of egzamination is coming; i not only know it but i feel it.
Firstly, i feel pressured on the last days before the examination. I think it\'s because of teachers. They give more and more homework. Moreover, they keep repeating all the time that we are not learningworking/studying enough . Secondly, i start thinking/worrying more about coming egzams. I am so concerned about my exams so that i cannot focus on studying. In addition, I can hardly get to sleep because my mind is set on studies. Surely/Certainly, I understand that i have to study and prepare for egzaminations, my self but it\'s
only my minds(what did you want to say?). I am too weak to force my self because i am not a strong willed person at all. Speaking generally, i think that such feelings are normal/natural and all graduates feel as i do. I think/hope everything will change after egzams.
that\'s one of possible corrections i would suggest to think of a clearer topic sentence and later follow the structure of the paragraph. that is state your supporting ideas, use linking words (and don\'t forget commas ) also, in formal writing you shouldn\'t use short forms (eg not i\'m, but i am )
va tingiu dar daugiau plestis next time if anybody wishes
varniux rašė: The day of egzamination is coming; i not only know it but i feel it.
Firstly, i feel pressured on the last days before the examination. I think it\'s because of teachers. They give more and more homework. Moreover, they keep repeating all the time that we are not learningworking/studying enough . Secondly, i start thinking/worrying more about coming egzams. I am so concerned about my exams so that i cannot focus on studying. In addition, I can hardly get to sleep because my mind is set on studies. Surely/Certainly, I understand that i have to study and prepare for egzaminations, my self but it\'s
only my minds(what did you want to say?). I am too weak to force my self because i am not a strong willed person at all. Speaking generally, i think that such feelings are normal/natural and all graduates feel as i do. I think/hope everything will change after egzams.
that\'s one of possible corrections i would suggest to think of a clearer topic sentence and later follow the structure of the paragraph. that is state your supporting ideas, use linking words (and don\'t forget commas ) also, in formal writing you shouldn\'t use short forms (eg not i\'m, but i am )
va tingiu dar daugiau plestis next time if anybody wishes
thanks thanks varniux you are the best. but the topic sentence has been gived to me. so you say that i am not following the structure of the paragraph ??? what that\'s mean \" state your supporting ideas\" ??? Comas ??? but we didn\'t learn about comas in school. thanks fo explaining anyway............ok i will use only long forms. thanks as i said you are the best varniux.
Meras rašė: thanks thanks varniux you are the best. but the topic sentence has been gived to me. so you say that i am not following the structure of the paragraph ??? what that\'s mean \" state your supporting ideas\" ??? Comas ??? but we didn\'t learn about comas in school. thanks fo explaining anyway............ok i will use only long forms. thanks as i said you are the best varniux.
nu jau nujau, padedu kuo galiu, kam tie bestai
galima, lietuviskai, bo nesigalvoja jau in english :
supporting ideas yra tai, kuo tu paremi savo topic sentence. jie prasideda su firstly, kita idea eina su secondly, baigi su finally/lastly. ir butinadeti kablelius po siu jungiamuju zodeliu (uh, pamenu, kaip mano mokytoja \'ede\' mumis del tu linking words ).ir jeigu jau yra \'firstly, tai turi buti ir secondly . kas dar?- taip pat nereiketu naudoti snekamosios kalbos zodziu arba sutrumpinimu, tokiu kaip pas tave buvo \'gonna\'. topic sentence sudaro/jis apima/ tavo atskiras supporting ideas.
kol kas tiek, jei kas dar ateis i galva-papildysiu. or you can always ask questions yourself good luck in writing all those paragraphs/essays
Temą
2003 02 01 d. 16:08 pradėjo
) also, in formal writing you shouldn\'t use short forms (eg not i\'m, but i am )
nu jau nujau, padedu kuo galiu, kam tie bestai 
(uh, pamenu, kaip mano mokytoja \'ede\' mumis del tu linking words 
